Jack and the Beanstalk

Once upon a time there was a boy called Jack. He was playing hide and seek with his friend Bobby in the woods. The next minute Bobby saw a little weed pushing its way through the soggy mud. “Jack I’ve found something coming through the ground” said Bobby.

 

The weed suddenly began to grow into a gigantic beanstalk, Jack and Bobby started to climb.
Jack and Bobby finally got to the top of the beanstalk and discovered a castle. Bobby slowly opens the door and discovers a princess called Belle lives inside. Jack and Bobby both hear their Mum’s shouting for them so they both slowly, carefully, quietly closed the unique castle door and climbed  down the beanstalk and went to eat their tea.

1 Comment

  1. Naomi says:

    Well done Teri that is amazing also I liked the way that you have put lots of descriptive words. I think that it could of been better if you made sure all your sentences make sense.Apart from that it is amazing.!!

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