Snow White 100wc Oliwia

Once lived a girl named Snow White. One day she found a little cottage in the forest. Snow White wandered in. She needed a rest after a long walk to the forest, as she went inside she scrambled up stairs she discovered 7 mini beds in a large jam-packed room. Meanwhile some dwarves came back from work and wanted to get to sleep as fast as possible. When they found Snow White sleeping in their beds. Once they found out who she was and where she’d come from Snow White lived with them. One day a witch gave her a poised apple and she turned into a… TOAD.

3 Comments

  1. Mr London says:

    Well done Oliwia. This has now been uploaded to the blog. You are post number 1634.

  2. Kasey says:

    WOW Oliwia really good story I like the ending where you say she turns in to a toed.

  3. Mrs Symonds says:

    Hi Oliwia,
    A very good piece of writing. Perhaps next time you could look at trying to start sentences in different ways, you used “One day” and “Once” quite a lot.
    Well done for entering this weeks 100 word challenge.
    Mrs Symonds (Team 100WC)
    Lintin, Cambridge

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