Michael’s terrific teeth cleaning instructions

6 Comments

  1. Jake says:

    Fantastic teeth instructions Micheal!

  2. Lydia says:

    Amazing instructions Michael. Well done!

    1. Michael says:

      Thanks Lydia for putting a comment on my instrustions.

  3. Mr London says:

    What great instructions Michael! You’ve included imperative verbs, time connectives, a handy hint, a warning and a number of simple, specific instructions that make it clear to the reader (in this case listener) what to do. I really like the line ‘After that get brushing!’ It shows you are really thinking about what you are writing. Now try adding a catchy title and introduction that explains what your instructions are for. Try something like ‘Instructions for how to keep your teeth sparkly white. Follow these instructions for the cleanest teeth in town!’

  4. Mrs Murray says:

    Wow! What clear and well constructed instructions you have recorded. Well done, Michael. I love the way you added a friendly tip. I can’t wait to read your final written piece – will you bring it to show me?

  5. Lucy says:

    Good Michael next time use a pea-sized blob.

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